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15th March 2014

Karthick texting Priya

Karthick: Oye enna panra
Priya: chumma than iruken
Karthick: seri, un problem enna? Yen enna reject panra?
Priya: arambikadha, unakae theriyum. Enga veetla othuka maatanga and avangala meeri na edhuvum seiya maaten
Karthick: appo unku enna Pudikuma
Priya: I like you as a friend
Kartik: unga veetla ok sonna, unaku okva?
Priya: enga veetla ok solla maatanga
Karthick: yen? Caste paapangala? Illa Nan black nu yosikiriya?
Priya: ayyo pls. Enga veetla ok sonnalum, enaku no than
Karthick: athan yen?
Priya: yenna enaku unna romba naala theriyum, ennala unna en better half ah imagine panna mudiyala
Karthick: yen ippadi pesura? Nan enkooda en future ah imagine panni vachi iruken. Un madiyila paduthutu nee solrathellam ketutu apadi ellam yosichitu iruken.
Priya: pls forget me and you should marry someone else
Karthick: unna na kalyanam pannikalana, yaraiyumae pannika maaten. Na ippdiyae irundhuduven
Priya: haha, apadilam illa, ellam maaridum
Karthick: nee paaka thana pora. Unkooda en life na already vazha arambichiten. Nee than en pondati.


19th December 2014

Karthick: Hi Priya, ivathan Ramya
Ramya: Ramya, idhaan Priya, solli irukenla
Priya: Hi Ramya
Ramya: hi, romba naala ungala meet pannanumnu asai
Priya: oru vazhiya paathutome. Happy to see you
Divya: dei Krishna, sorry Karthick
Karthick: Divya, un velaiya arambichitiya


19th May 2018

Priya: Kandippa neenga ellarum en marriage ku vandhudanum. Unga ellarayum expect pannitu irupen.
Divya: na enna solradhunae theriyala di. Nee evaloe dreams oda irundha. Aana nee ninachathu edhuvum nadakala. Yen nee ippadi iruka. Unkaga eppothan pesa pora? Na vena indha marriage ah stop pannatuma?
Priya: loosu maari edhuvum panni vaikathey. I'll take as it is. Vidu paathukalam. Namma friends ellarum varanum, athuku neethan porupu.


16th Jan 2015

Karthick texting Priya

Karthick: hi Priya
Priya: hey
Karthick: Ramya enaku ok solla maatra
Priya: keep trying. Vera enna panradhu. Yen avaluku unna pidikalaya
Karthick: illa, avalukum enna romba pidikum, aana solla maatra
Priya: appo wait Pannu, ellam nallatha than nadakum
Karthick: Ava ok sollita unaku than first call panni solluven. Treat vaikiren, okva?
Priya: hmm


19th Feb 2019

2pm

Karthick: Priya, indha pendant nalla irukanu paathu sollen.
Priya: yaarukuda? Ramya ka?
Karthick: illa, Ava than enna venamnu sollita.
Ramya: appo idhu yaaruku?
Karthick: epadi solradhunu theriyala
Priya: adapaavi, vera ponna? Enga meet panna?
Karthick: oru online chat site la. I was depressed and totally down. So yaarkoodayavadhu pesalamnu ponen. Avathan enaku comfort.
Priya: so love pannitiya? Online la love la nambalama? Nee yen ippadi iruka?
Karthick: nee paathu sollu. I want to gift her on her birthday. Appothan propose panna poren
Priya: seri ethoe Pannu, paathutu msg anupuren. Bye take care.

8pm

Priya's husband Rajesh looks at her mobile and started his arguments
Rajesh: enna msg idhu? Yaaru Avan?
Priya: en school friend
Rajesh: unkitta edhuku pendant suggestions ketkuren
Priya: athula vera edhuvum thappa illaiyae. Suggestions thana ketkuran
Rajesh: enaku ithellam seriya padala. Inimel yaarkittayavadhu nee pesuratha paathen mobile ah thooki pottu udachiduven.


20 Feb 2019

Karthick: thanks Priya, un selection super
Priya: nethu ne text pannatha en husband paathutu ore sanda
Karthick: yen, enna achu?
Priya: inimel text/call pannatha, atleast Nana initiate pannara varaikum
Karthick: idhukuthan appavae sonnen
Priya: stop it Karthick



To be continued
 
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20 Oct 2018

2pm

Karthick logging in chat site, randomly texting someone

Karthick: hey care for a chat? Will not ask your asl, let's just talk? Was intrigued by your username. What language it is?
Bonnechance: French
Karthick: Thanks for the reply. What does it mean?
Bonnechance: Good luck in French
Karthick: You are telling me goodluck?
Bonnechance: haha
Karthick: Are you an introvert?
Bonnechance: kind of, why?
Karthick: illa romba pesa maatringa, ketathuku mattum bathil varudhu
Bonnechance: ok, tell me about you, what are you looking for?
Karthick: I just want to vent out
Bonnechance: Go ahead. I'm listening
Karthick: I don't know where to start with.
Bonnechance: starting trouble ah
Karthick: lol, ok. I love a girl from college, proposed her but she rejected and I'm depressed
Bonnechance: Love failure ah. It happens right? Just move on. You have life. If this is yours it will come to you. Cheet up. You will soon find your love
Karthick: thanks for your kind words. But ennala avala maraka mudiyala. Athan Inga chatroom vandhen.
Bonnechance: how long you are here?
Karthick: a week and didn't find anyone to talk. Inaki enaku lucky day pola, to meet you. How long you are using this site? Btw what's your age?
Meena: a month. Yaaroe asl ketka maatenu sonnanga
Karthick: haha, Age is just a number. Just wanted to know to whom I'm talking to. Btw I'm Karthick, neenga?
Bonnechance: I'm Meena. Nice to meet you Karthick. I've to go. Talk to you later
Karthick: wait wait, later na epponu sollitu po. Nanum varen
Bonnechance: around 8?
Karthick: sure, I'll login and wait for you. Seeya
Bonnechance: Bye


8.30pm

Karthick: hey. I was waiting for you for so long. Thought you wouldn't login and was about to logout
Bonnechance: sorry, got a call and it carried away. So sorry to make you wait
Karthick: that's okay. Was just watching the main and the fun of the people around. I tried pinging one or two but no response.
Bonnechance: ellarum enna maari irupaangala
Karthick: I don't want to miss you, shall we share ids?
Bonnechance: lol, we just met and you wanted to have my id? How strange?
Karthick: idhula enna iruku. You are so nice to talk with and I like you as a person
Bonnechance: nallathan pesura. But how can I trust you?
Karthick: Trust, it takes time to build. But is it ok for you to lose a person?
Bonnechance: whatif you are not a good person
Kartik: Define good. Good person na yaaru?
Bonnechance: I know it's subjective. But nee sollu. In a chat site like this, how do you think I can trust anyone?
Karthick: I agree, but you can trust me and my actions speak louder than what I say now. You will see that over time. But then I'll leave upto you to decide
Bonnechance: seri seri, meena@64635 my tele id. I have to go now. Seeya in tele. Bye


30 Oct 2018

Karthick: It been days since we know each other and I'm liking this
Meena: You know what? Idhellam oru initial attraction than, will fade with time
Kartik: I don't think so. Do you still think we are friends? Don't you feel we are connected?
Meena: I told you I was in a relationship and I'm still waiting for him
Karthick: He chose his family over you. Why do you wait for him
Meena: you don't understand. I still love him.
Karthick: un ishtam. But what we have between us is unique. Feel it
Meena: nee romba film paathu kettu poita
Karthick: seri sollu, you never felt possesive?
Meena: unkittaya? Nope
Kartik: seri vidu


5th December 2018

Karthick: I wanted to tell you something
Meena: sollu
Karthick: kova pada koodathu
Meena: lol, enna bayangarama iruku. Go ahead
Karthick: promise me you won't leave me
Meena: huh
Karthick: pls
Meena: seriiiii, sollu
Karthick: I told you about a girl I loved in college right?
Meena: yes, athuku enna ippo?
Karthick: I slept with her
Meena: what????
Karthick: I just don't want to hide anything from you
Meena: How could you do this?
Karthick: sorry, but it happened
Meena: 😭😭😭😭
Karthick: pls don't cry. Say something
Meena: it just upset me. Pls gimme some time. I couldn't take this. Will talk to you later
Karthick: Meena pls, don't do this
Meena: how could you even do this to me
Karthick: I don't want to hide anything from you
Meena: Don't talk to me
Karthick: Anyways namma just friends thana, why does this bother you
Meena: what????




To be continued
 
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To be continued ilaya :O
Yes yes to be continued iruku. Poda marandhuten

I just realised, to write three different stories its going to take long than I expected and it's going to be difficult to take it into different direction unless one get into an imagination
 

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16th March 2019

Divya: Priya, eppadi iruka
Priya: Divya, I'm dying to talk to someone. Thanks for calling me today
Divya: enna achu da
Priya: en life naragama iruku. Ennala mudiyala. Enna panradhunu theriyala.
Divya: relax. Enna achunu sollu
Priya: onna renda solradhuku, over possesive husband, edhuku eduthalum sandhega paduraaru, in laws torture- oru freedom illa, madiku poganum nalum permission ketutu than poganum, sil she is a torture as well. She is married but Inga than stay panranga, she wants to rule the house. I'm crying daily
Divya: ithukuthan unkitta appavae sonnen. Nee ketkala. Unga veetla sonniya?
Priya: innum sollala. Ippadiyae en life poiduma? I'm just tried of everything.
Divya: unaku na advice panra edathula nee illa. You know how to handle people
Priya: yes I know. But this. Enna nalla use panraanga, ennala edhuvum pesa mudiyala. Husband supportive ah illa. Edhuku eduthalum sanda podraaru
Divya: police complaint kuduthudu Priya
Priya: athellam seiya maaten. Sorry to bother you with this.
Divya: nee Karthick ah kalyanam panninirundha happy ya irundhu irupa. Idhellam unku thevai ya.
Priya: edhuku eduthalum avanayae izhukaatha. En fate ippadi aaganumnu mudivu irundha, maatha mudiyaathu. Seri inoru naal pesuren. Athai koopiduraanga. Bye


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Feb 14th 2018


Karthick: Priya, namma rendu perum kalyanam pannikalama?
Priya: veetla othuka maatanga Karthick.
Karthick: namma register marriage pannikalam. Yaarum namaluku vendam. Yengayavadhu poidalam. Un ishtam edhuvoe. We will be happy. Trust me
Priya: ennala indha vishyathula mudivu eduka mudiyala. Enaku en family mukkiyam
Kartik: namma happy ah vazhratha paathu avangalae namala thedi varuvaanga. Nee yosikatha.
Karthick: enna nambi en kooda varuviya?
Ramya: :)


16th March 2019

Walking in the sands by the riverside hand in hand

Priya: Karthi, Naa romba happy ah iruken. Love you
Karthick kisses her
Priya: unaku enna yen pidichi iruku?
Karthick: theriyala, aana pidikum
Priya: enaku ippo yaarum vendamnu thonudhu. Let's live this life together as always
Karthick: appadiyae aagatum Devi!


27th Feb 2024

Priya: Karthi, na work la iruken, namma kuttiya pick up panniduriya?
Karthick: school gate la than iruken. Innum vidala
Priya: love you 💗
Karthick: namma inaki dinner ku veliya porome. Seekiram vandhudu
Priya: seri seri, let's go to my favourite place this time
Karthick: theriyumae, Anga than table reserve panni iruken. Seekaram va. Naanga rendu perum waiting
Priya: seri da, seeya soon
Karthick: love you



To be Continued
 

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7th December 2018

Karthick: so you decided not to talk to me anymore?
Meena: Sorry Karthick. I know I reacted too much. I shouldn't have
Karthick: athellam onnum illa.
Meena: Its your personal. Who am I to involve. na overa react panniten.
Karthick: apadilam pesatha. You have all the rights to ask me
Meena: seri, oru ponnu thana illa vera edhavadhu
Karthick: I wanted to tell you the truth. You want me to reveal it now?
Meena: ayyo venam, yerkanavae nee sonna unmaiya ketta athirchila iruken. idhuku mela mudiyathu. Let everything wait until tomorrow.
Karthick: Sure. Do you still like me?
Meena: Ofcourse. Dont ever do this again



8th December 2018


Karthick: Care for the truth?
Meena: Go ahead. Pls don't hurt me with the truth.
Karthick: haha, that was lie
Meena: Which was?
Karthick: The other day, I told you I slept with the girl right? That's a lie
Meena: What?? Thank God. yen ippadi oru poi sonna?
Karthick: I wanted to know if you love me
Meena: And?
Karthick: And I got it
Meena: What is it?
Karthick: that you love me and you are possessive and I like that
Meena: That's not true.
Karthick: It's ok nee edhuvum solla vendam. I know what I need to know. We will leave it to the time.


21 Feb 2019

Ramya calling Priya

Ramya: hi priya, eppadi iruka? romba naal achu pesi
Priya: All good, nee?
Ramya: enakenna, nallathan iruken
Priya: yen indha salipu? edhuvum prechanaiya?
Ramya: I wanted to tell you something.
Priya: sollu
Ramya: last week Karthick Kitta pesinen
Priya: ok, enna sonnan avan?
Ramya: avan edhuvum sollala, na than avan kitta enna kalyana pannikiriyanu keten
Priya: wow, avan enna sonnan?
Ramya: onnum sollala
Priya: yes, no edhuvum sollalaya?
Ramya: avanukum enna pidikum, but onnum solla maatran
Priya: na vena, kettu pakava?
Ramya: venam, just unkitta sollanumnu thonuchi, athan sonnen. Regulara dailyum pesurome. so pidikum thana?
Priya: avan enkitta edhuvum sollala Ramya, sonna unkitta solren

22 Feb 2019

Priya calling Karthick

Priya: Dei, nee Ramya kitta pesitu irukiya? sollavae illa
Karthick: aama, chumma casual talk than. ava sonnala?
Priya: ava un love ku ok sollitala?
Karthick: na ippo avala love panalayae
Priya: adei, nee adi vaanga pora. nee love panna ponnu thana? kalyana pannikiradhula unaku enna prechanai
Karthick: Na ketkum bodhu love illa, ippo thideernu love eppadi varum?
Priya: ippo purinji vandhu iruka, ok solla unaku enna prechanai?
Karthick: ava mobile la en name eh "Karthick College" save panni iruka. enna oru college mate ah thaan paakura
Priya: idhuku poi love illanu solluvaangala?
Karthick: athu mattum illa, she just want to marry someone now. adhu naana irundha nalla irukumnu feel panra, avaloethan. avalukaga nee support pannadha
Priya: appo edhuku avakitta dailyum pesura?
Karthick: pesuradhula enna thappu
Priya: adhu avaluku thappa convey aagumla. nee love panalana, just casual ah pesu and just be clear and tell her that you dont love her and dont have ideas of marrying her. paavam ava karpanaila irupala. You are just hurting her.
Karthick: seri ok, naa pathukuren vidu


27 Feb 2019

Meena: Karthi
Karthick: enna adhisayam, first time you started the conversation
Meenu: Wanted to tell you something important
Karthick: sollu
Meena: Ram ippo call pannan. Said he talked to his family and avan family accept pannitaangalam. next two monthsla engaluku marriage
Karthick: enna solra?
Meena: naathaan unkitta yerkanavae solli iruken la. I love him and waiting for him nu. I'm so happy today and wanted to share my happiness with you


To be continued​
 

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Let's End February with a Bang!

Hey everyone,

As February draws to a close, we're gearing up to conclude the month of love with a flourish of creativity! Whether you've been a regular contributor or you're just joining us now, this is your final opportunity to weave your imaginative tales into our storytelling tapestry. If you've missed out on previous weeks – there's no better time to jump in than now!

This week, we're diving into a unique plot that will test your storytelling imagination. We're delving into the intricate web of relationships, that bind us together.

But here's the twist: this week, we're focusing on the theme of choice. We are taking a fresh approach to storytelling. Instead of picking up where we left off, we're starting from scratch with the characters you are going to meet now.

But here's where things get interesting. What if our characters were faced with a choice that could change the course of their lives forever? How would their stories unfold if they took a different path, embraced a new destiny?

Picture this: the brooding loner who decides to open up his heart to love, or the ambitious dreamer who dares to chase her passions against all odds. Each decision sends ripples through the fabric of their existence, reshaping their realities in unexpected ways.

Your challenge is to weave these threads of possibility into a tapestry of storytelling magic. Will our characters find happiness, fulfillment, or perhaps even heartache along the way? The choice is yours to make.

And remember, every great story deserves a captivating conclusion. Whether it's a bittersweet farewell or a triumphant victory lap, be sure to wrap up your tale with a sense of closure and satisfaction.

So, let your imagination run wild and explore the infinite possibilities that lie within our characters' lives. Who knows what wonders you'll uncover along the way?

And don't forget the visuals – a compelling image can set the stage for your narrative and draw readers in from the very first glance.

So, dust off your creativity and let your imagination soar. The stage is set, the characters are waiting – now it's up to you to bring their stories to life.


Here is how it goes!!

Ramya, Priya, Karthick, and Meena were entangled in a complex web of relationships. Karthick's affection for Priya during their school days stirred up emotions and he confessed his love, only to be met with Priya's shocked silence.

As they parted ways for college, Karthick found solace in his growing feelings for Ramya, while Priya remained supportive despite her own emotional turmoil. However, Ramya's heart belonged elsewhere, leaving Karthick in a state of confusion.

Meanwhile, Meena, another friend in their circle, faced her own romantic struggles. Karthick, seeking comfort, confessed his feelings to her, only to be met with rejection. Yet, Priya remained a pillar of support for Karthick.

Years passed, and life took its course. Priya found happiness in marriage, but by her husband's possessiveness, which strained her relationship with Karthick. Ramya's fleeting affections led her to marry another friend, leaving Karthick with a sense of closure but also lingering loneliness.

As for Meena, she too found her path, eventually marrying her troubled partner, closing the chapter on her romantic journey.


Though their individual journeys had led them down different paths, they remained forever intertwined, bound by the ties of friendship and love that transcended the passage of time.

We have four characters here. Elaborate each and every character and their story behind. You can add few more wherever necessary and take this story in different direction of love filled life. Looking forward to being swept away by your imagination once again!

@Assistantdon @Meen @Ancio @Olive @Meen @Agnii @Mathangi @MASK @RajNi @Balan72 @Ohmylove @Anija @Aadhini
Meena,Krish and Rakesh were entangled in a complex web triangle situation Meena met both Krish and rakesh on a 2 days Trek,
Rakesh was a normal trekker like Meena and Krish was the Trek guide. Meena was single at that time. During the trek, Knish was with Meena, they didn’t speak much, but the way Knish was looking at Meena she could sense that he was interested in her. But Meena was sure that she wasn’t interested.

While returning from the trek, Meena had conversation with Rakesh, he was a jolly type and very active guy.
Meena fell for him at that moment. They arrived in the city at 10am and did goodbye to each other, till then
Meena didn’t know his name. While shaking the hands, Meena asked him his name. He said his first name Rakesh
Meena was expecting his full name though. She didn’t ask Rakesh number neither he did. But that’s Okay. Meena thought
may be they weren’t destined to be in contact.

But the other guy, Krish stalked Meena on Instagram and took her WhatsApp number to transfer pics.Exactly after 2 days, Meena got a friend request from Rakesh, She was so happy, without wasting time she accepted it and waved him.After a little talk, Meena wanted to know Rakesh better so asked him indirectly where he stays in Bangalore. But unfortunately Rakeshsaid he lives in another city and already flew from Bangalore. Meena was heart broken at that moment as she didn’t want any long distance relationship as she already was in a long distance relationship with Praveen for an year and it didn’t work out. But still Meena and Rakesh continued to talk everyday over call.

Meanwhile Krish was trying hard to get Meena's attention, but she used to ignore him most of the times. but Krish and meena
Live in the same city. Rakesh and meena both planned for another trek and nobody knew about it. And other side Krish was trying to be friendly and asked many times to go for a trek with him. So Krish, meena and few of Meena's friends went for a trek near their city there Krish tried to impress meena and after spending time Meena was impressed actually. Now Meena has feelings for both of them. And she can’t tell it to anyone. Meena tried many times to tell them both but she didn’t have the courage.

This continued for more than a month, Rakesh and Meena went for a trek again and he proposed meena there and she was confused
and didn't say anything. Meena Told him I need more time to think about it. And during that trek Meena missed Krish the most. She returned back to city,Krish proposed Meena and she said yes to him. Rakesh wasn’t aware of it. Everyday giving time to both of them was getting worse. Meena started ignoring Rakesh. And one fine day Krish got to know about him and asked me to tell Rakesh the truth. Meena told Rakesh the truth, but he wasn’t ready to accept it. But somehow she made him understand that its
difficult for her to talk to both of you but they can be friends.

After two months being in relationship with Krish, Meena realized he is hiding something from me, and discovered that he is dating
his ex. Meena spoke to him and Krish said they are in touch but its over, he loves meena. But Meena didn’t believe him. Krish used to get upset everyday, and whenever Meena asked him, He would say he doesnt know why he is upset. Krish used to switch off
his phone whole night and there were days they didn’t talk at all. Meena was irritated, She never wanted to be in a relationship like
this. Meena was always a happy girl and always want to live the life fullest. So she decided to break up with him and Meena did.
Krish tried to save this but Meena was sure about her decision. she cut off all the contacts with Krish

Rakesh and Meena are in touch today, they both wish each other on birthdays. Talk for hours once in a while. They are good friends now.
 

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Make sure you have appropriate title for each of your story. Voting will be taken tomorrow with your title of the story. So if you missed title for any of your story, now is the time. If I see no title, I'll post an appropriate title, aparam title nalla illanu feel panna koodathu.
 

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@Assistantdon @Ancio @Meen @Olive @Agnii

Make sure you have appropriate title for each of your story. Voting will be taken tomorrow with your title of the story. So if you missed title for any of your story, now is the time. If I see no title, I'll post an appropriate title, aparam title nalla illanu feel panna koodathu.
Oh ok .Voting ah I didnt know about that haha :)
 

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M for Meena

Karthik dhidukkendru Kan vizhithaan. Idhu unmaidhaana? Avanukkul viyappu. Kangalil kalaippu. Kanavil irundhu vizhithadhu pola avanuku thondriyadhu.
Veliye avanadhu paati thinnaiyil amarndhu vettrilai paaku madithu kondu irundhaar.


"Karthi, pallikoodam povalaya?"
"illa paati, enakku thala valikkudhu, school-ku leave pottukaren"
"Nalla kadhaiyaa pochu. Unga appanuku yaaru badhil solluradhu, odiyaa, seekiram thanni vaathuttu vaa.. Ayyan varra neram aachu, unna pallikoodathula uttutu aaspathiri poganumnu sollitu irundharu"


araimani nerathil school uniform-udan thayaraaga irundha Karthi-yai thooki, thanadhu cycle-in mun seetil amarthi kondu purapattar Ayyan

Senthil-in kadai arugil sendru kondirukkaiyil suthhira mittai Avan kannil pattadhu.
"Ayya, cycle niruthu. Suthiramittai vaangitu vandhudren"
Cycle nindravudan orey ottamaaga odinaan, angu vandhu kondirundha lorry-ai gavanikkamal. Vegaamaaga vandha lorry Avan Mel modhamal irukka, dhisai maari sendradhu. Idhanaal, Bullet-il vandhu kondirundha Devaraj nilai kulaindhu, bullet sarindhu varappil vizhundhaar.

Ayyan cycle-ai keezhe pottuvittu ayyovendru thalaiyil adithu kondu odivandhaar. Avar peranai thooki anaippadharkul, Devaraj vizhundha idathil koottam adhigamaaga serndhu irundhadhu. Avanai oru car-il yettri aaspathiriyil serthanar.

Aaspathiriyil avaradhu Amma, "innum oru vaarathula kalyanam. Veetu vittu veliya pogadhadanu kaalailaye sonnen, kettaana ivan, aiyo ippadi kedakkaraane" endru kooriyabadiye azhudhu kondirundhaar.

Andru maalai Padma avaladhu Appa-vudan aaspathirikku vandhu irundhaal. Devaraj-ai andha nilamaiyil paarthavudan aval kangal kulamaagiyadhu.

Devaraj: aiyo azhadhadi
Padma: eppadinga azhaama iruka mudiyum? Rendaavadhu thadavaya kalyanam thalli pogudhu. Ellorum ennaiya raasi illadhavanu soldranga
Devaraj: oh, naa inga adi pattu paduthirukaradhu unakku kavalaya illa appo
Padma: indha lollu-ku onnum koraichale illa
Devaraj: good, ippadidhan sirichittey irukanum. Sari andha Apple-ah cut panni kudu
Padma: naa onnu sollatuma?
Devaraj: enna?
Padma: illa, ippadi thadangal vandhuttey irukke... Oruvela namma sera koodadhunu saami solludho?
Devaraj: ada loosu. Idhellam accident, manasa kolappikaadha
Padma: illainga, 4 varusham munnadi engagement mudinja konja naalulaiye andha accident
Devaraj: adhu... Andha kozhandhai paavam, ball vilaiyadite thavazhndhu road ku poradhu kuda theriyama avanga Amma ninnutu irundhanga. Naa odi poi sathham pottadhunala dhan avanga alert aananga... Illaina, enna aagirkumo
Priya: mmmm. Andha kozhandhai-ku onnum aagala. Adhula vizhundhu fracture aagi neengadhan moonu maasam paduthittinga.
Devaraj: hahaha
Padma: sirikkadhinga. Appove nadakka vendiya kalyanam, thalli pottu, apram neenga MS padikkirenu poittu, 4 varusham kaathirundhu, kalyanam aagara time la ungaluku thirumbavum ippadi...
Devaraj: ellam sari aagidum, kavala padadhada thangam. Enna nadandhaalum, needhan en pondatti


Andru maalai thotta velaigal mudithuvittu veetu thinnaiyil amarndhirundhar paati. Ayyanum karthiyum veedu vandhu serndhaargal
Cycle-ai niruthivittu Ayyan pechai aarambithar
"Innaiku kaalaila ivan panna koothu. Nenjey ninnupochu"
"Yengga, enna pannan"
"Suthura muttai venumnu road-ah pakkama kanna moodikittu oduraan, nallavela... Saami punniyathula thapichaan"
"Aiyo. Ivanukku road-la dhan gandam irukkumaatudhu. 7 maasa kozhandhaiya irukappovum appadidhan ponaan. Edho andha mavaraasan sathham pottadhunaala ava poi thookina"
"Manase ketka mattengudhu. Vidiyaala kovilukku poittu vandruvom"


Sila maadhangalukku piragu...

Thanadhu arumai magalai, tholil vaithu seeraatti kondu irundhaar Devaraj.

"Athhai maama laam vandhuttu irukkangala" endru kettal Padma

"Appa kitta ippodhan pesinen. Rohini natchathiramaam paapa. Romba sandhoshama irukkaru."

"Avaruku ponnu dhan pidikumaam, neenga vandhu porandhuttingannu feel pannitu irupparu. Ippo pethhi vandhachula, ini sollave vendaam"

"Natchathiram ellam paarthutu, Peru select pandra varaikum poittaru. Apram naan solliten, vendaampa, Padma yerkanave sollirka, Paiyyan porandha Ram, Ponnu na Ramya apdinu"

"illainga, natchathiram paarthey numerology padiye vaippom"

"Idhu eppo irundhu"

"Mama sonna madiri veedu vastu ellam maathinadhuku apram dha nimmadhiya irukkom, adhukku munnadi orey porattam, apram neenga keezha vizhundhadhu, ippadi neraiyya"

"Mmm. Sari ok"

"enna letter sollirkaanga"

"ma varisayila vaikkalaamnu sonnar Appa"

"Meena?"


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Karthik dhidukkendru Kan vizhithaan. Idhu unmaidhaana? Avanukkul viyappu. Kangalil kalaippu. Kanavil irundhu vizhithadhu pola avanuku thondriyadhu.
Veliye avanadhu paati thinnaiyil amarndhu vettrilai paaku madithu kondu irundhaar.

"Karthi, pallikoodam povalaya?"
"illa paati, enakku thala valikkudhu, school-ku leave pottukaren"
"Nalla kadhaiyaa pochu. Unga appanuku yaaru badhil solluradhu, odiyaa, seekiram thanni vaathuttu vaa.. Ayyan varra neram aachu, unna pallikoodathula uttutu aaspathiri poganumnu sollitu irundharu"


araimani nerathil school uniform-udan thayaraaga irundha Karthi-yai thooki, thanadhu cycle-in mun seetil amarthi kondu purapattar Ayyan

Senthil-in kadai arugil sendru kondirukkaiyil suthhira mittai Avan kannil pattadhu.

"Ayya, cycle niruthu. Suthiramittai vaangitu vandhudren"

Cycle stand pottuvittu, thanadhu peranin Kai pidithu kadai-ku azhaithu sendraar Ayyan.
Appozhudhu bullet-il thanadhu magaludan angu vandhirundhaar Devaraj.


"vanakkam thambi, sowkkiyamgala?"
"Sowkkiyam dhanunga. Unga perana?"
"Aama thambi"
"Kozhandhaiyya irukappo paarthadhu. 6 maasa kozhandhai-nu nenaikkaren. Avanga Amma kuda vilaiyaaditu irundhappo parthen. Appove sonnabadiyellam ketpaan. Appo paarthadhu, ippo periya paiyyan aagitaan"
"Padma nalla irukkapdiya? Idhu unga ponnungala?"
"Aamanga"
"Peru enna saami"

aval vetkapattu kondey thanadhu peyarai koorinaal
"Priya"
 
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Story 1:
கண்ணை கட்டி விட்டாலும், பட்டாம்பூச்சி பூவை தேடும்

Story 2:
உயிரோடு முன்பே கலந்தாய்

Story 3:
Love is thicker than Blood

Story 4:
M for Meena
 

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Mudhal nee, mudivum nee

In the bustling early evening park, all he could hear amidst the noise was the rhythmic thud of his own heartbeat and the distant murmur of a faint voice breaking through.

"Eppo vanthe, Karthik?" she asked her attempt to conceal her excitement in seeing him evident in her voice.
"Ippo thaa Priya" he replied punctuated by gasps, as he was struggling to catch his breath. He was trying hard not to make eye contact, if he did she would see right through him. But each time she said "Karthik" his heart raced. Afraid of fainting again like last time they met, he asked "Can we sit somewhere?"

After a few awkward conversation starters, she cut straight to the point. She asked "yen ethuku nu elaam keka maatiya, va nu sona odane kelambi vanthuruviya"

Karthik: (still avoiding her prying eyes) "naane una paaka oru chance .."
Priya: (pretending to be angry) enathu?
Karthik: ila ila, Singapore la oru travel photography class offer vanthuchu, but nee ethaachu nenapiyo nu varla. ipo neeye sonathum odane vanthuten.
Priya: naa una photo eduka vara solala... un kalyanatha pathi pesa.
Karthik gets uneasy and looking away he asks, "athaan anaiku phone la pesitom la, naa Meena kita keten, ava mudiyaathu nu solitaan nu"

Priya: dei pulugaandi, ipidi poi soluve nu thaan una nerla vara vechen. Ithu elaam Shuba nambuva, enkita elaam nadakaathu.
KarthiK: Shuba va? ava ena sona?
Priya: Un college la Ramya nu oru ponna nee love pani, ava venda nu solta nu solli vechurke.
Karthik: ila Priya, athu Shuba ena nenachu rombo varutha patta, athaan apidi..
Priya: Enkita ena da sonne anaiku Chennai la keta apo, ethu unmai apo.. solli thola
Karthik: unkita sonathu thaan Priya. Una paaka vanthen la un college ku..
Both Karthik and Priya, looked at each other, seeing the pain in each other's eyes.

Karthik: athuku aprom pythiam maathuri neraya panen. Shuba thaan iruntha kooda. Rombo kashta padutheeten avala, paavam.. Apo thaan Ramya, college la pesa arambucha. Nalla ponnu, enmela rombo akkarai kaatina. Pasanga naala problem elaam vanthuchu avaluku, naa help panine. Athuku aprom rombo neringi pesra maari therinjuthu, enaala iyalba ava kita palaga mudila. Shuba rendu moonu vaati naanga pesratha paathu santhoshapatta, oru valiya naan normal ayiten nu, unna maranthuten nu...


Priya: mmm, un kathai ku va Ramya ena aana? ena sonna?
Karthik: athaan naa anaike sonen la, college mudinjathum oru naal nerla pesalaam nu sona. Ponen, Kalyanam paniklaam nu sona.
Priya: mmm, nejama sollu unaku ava mela konjam kooda love ilayada (trying to look at his eyes)
Karthik: (thinks of Ramya and smiles slightly) friend Priya avalo thaan, rombo nalla ponnu. Avala vanthu vanthu pesuva. Naa thaan munadiye una pathi soleerkanum, paavam.
Priya: (frustrated) aama oor full ah mic pottu sollu, apo thaan evalum pakathula kooda vara maata

Karthik: (trying to escape that fiery glare) ethaachu sapadlaama pasikithu, Singapore la ena nalla irukum
Priya: (smiling) inga oruthi kathikitu iruka...

(20 minutest later, at his hotel room)

Priya: aama Meena un student ah iruntha la, antha ponnu thaane? Chennai la kooda restaurant la meet paninome
Karthik: hmm ava thaan, IT la work panraa ipo.
Priya: mm ava anaike una paathutu iruntha, kandipa workout airukum, nee soniya love panren nu
Karthik: hmmm sonen, pidikum nu
Priya: ethuu! pidikum na
Karthik: ila athuku aprom kalyanam paniklaamaa num keten
Priya: (with all her hopes up she asked) mmm aprom? ava ena sona
KarthiK: ava sona ungala rombo naala love panren but sola bayama irunthuchu. Neenga kandipa othuka mateenga nu therium, irunthum unga kooda time spend panrathe rombo pidikum. Avalo pidikum ungala.
Priya: (hiding her jealousy) seri un pugal paadinathu pothum, ok sonaala ilaya
Karthik: Athaan sonene set agaathu nu solta nu
Priya: ena da kolapure

Karthik paused for a few seconds, gathering his courage before pressing on, his mind swirling with memories of what Meena had said that day, the words echoing in his mind..

"22 varushama ipidi Priya oda nenaivugal veche vaalreenga, avanga poitaanga nu nenachu... ipo avanglum kalayanam varai wait panitu irunthaanga nu therium, epidi ungalala avangala maranthutu enkooda iruka mudiyum.. neenga maranthaalum enaala mudiyaathu. Enaku epovum Priya edathuku naa vara mudila nu thaan thonum" "Seri nama paniklaam Karthik, santhoshama panikren, but neenga athuku aprom Priya va paakavo pesavo koodathu, ok va?"

Priya: (her eyes welled up) nee ena sone?
Karthik: naan enna solla? Avuluke therium..
Priya: (breaking down with tears) mudila da enaala.. yen da ipidi elaam nadakanum... anaiku una naan pathuruntha... (she cried..the weight of her emotions crashing over her like a tidal wave, each sob a raw expression of her inner pain)
Karthik had the same pain, for years, he moved near her and sat on the floor, holding her hand to console her.

After a few minutes..
Priya: (still struggling to hold her calm) Nee anaiku ketai la santhoshama irukiya nu.. Nimathiya iruken nu sonen apo, ipo athum ila da..

After 8 months..

The haunting sounds of the marriage that were playing in his mind, were now playing in real. He was trying not to go anywhere near the bride's room.
Janaki: (in her bridal saree, looking at the reflection in the mirror) yen ka, morning marriage mudinjathum book panirklaam la?
Priya: ila da, ponnu ku exams, kandipa poiye aaganum.. Seri intha pin ok va paaru (she was choosing hair pins for the bride)
Janaki: hmm atha vida chinathu ethum ilaya? .. unga kita neraya peslaam Karthik pathi therinjuklaam nu nenachen
Priya: "haha enkitaya" (she giggled, while giving her the pin and helping her with her dress)
Janaki: "ungala pathi neraya solirkaaru" (she watched for Priya's reactions)
Priya: (trying to hide all her emotions) "mmm, actual ah nee nethu reception ku pota colour vida ithu super ah iruku"
Janaki: "haha ithu Karthik selection, avar ku thaan vaada malli colour pidikum" (she pulled Priya by her hand and made her sit beside her) "inga vaanga, pothum naa ready aaiten, peslaam, neenga vera konja nerathula kelambeervenga"
Priya: (realizing there is no escape now) sure da peslaaame (she smiled) Nee sollu epidi meet panieenga, avan .. cha sorry Karthik.. epidi propose paninaan
Janaki: (blushing) avar appartment la move panina anaike, naa avara paathutu thaan irunthen. Elaar koodayum rombo friendly ah palaguvaar. Athe samayam ponunga kita elaam urrr nu thaan pesuvaar, aana ethaachu help na kekaamaye panuvaar. Enake theriala epo avara love pana arambichen nu but avara maari oru payana naa paathathe ila, avalo caring..

Priya zoned out as Janaki didnt say anything she did not know, she knew him more than anyone else in the world. Priya only saw Karthik Ramachandran, the 10th std boy who was hopelessly in love with her, the boy she fell head over heels for... As Janaki's voice got serious, Priya jolted back to reality.

Janaki: "Thideer nu oru naal naa paatu class la paaditu irunthen..Ivar vanthu kalyanam paniklaama nu ketaaar"
Priya: "enna paatu"
Janaki: (trying to remember) "mm seriya nyabagam ila, old song, thalapathy movie nu nenaikren"
Priya: "oh chumma thaa keten, nee sollu"

Janaki: "Ivar vanthu kalyanam paniklaama nu ketaaar.. Naan antha shock la irunthu varathuku munaddiye seri nu solten.. Aprom life eh maaridchu.. Ivar ah pesa pesa enaku yenakku innum ivar mela kathal jaasthi aachu.. Ungala pathiyum sonaar.. Love, girl friend, living relationships eh maraikara kaalathula, school love naalum atha enkita maraikaaama sonaar. And unga mela innum care iruku nu enaku theirum.." (noticing Priya's reactions change, she added) but enaku athu santhegam elaam ila, avara naa purinjupen. Neenga solunga, neenga Karthik ah love paneengala school la?

Priya: "athu love nu elaam sola mudiyaathu, tamil cinema paathu apidi nenachukutom" (both laughed) "aprom reality purinjithu, pirinjutom.. avan over build up kudupaan nambaathe"
"aana nejama solren, ivana maari oru payan yaarukum kedaika maataan.. avan unna nalla paathupaan" she paused for a second, and held Janaki's face by her cheeks and turned it to look her straight in the eye "neeyum avana nalla pathuko, seriya"
With a radiant smile, Janaki hugged Priya tightly, conveying a warmth that spoke volumes.

After a while, Priya bid farewell to Janaki and walked out of the hall. She kept walking, as the haunting sound of the melam faded and her sobs became more audible, her heart heavy with pain.

After 2 hours

Janaki: (she saw Karthik getting ready, ran towards him) Karthik, nalla iruka saree.. paaru..
Karthik: hey super ah iruku Jaanu, paaka azhaga iruke (he was admiring the way she was bllushing)
Janaki: (blushing for a few seconds, before she said) Hey aprom Priya unkita sola sonaanga, avanga poitu call panren nu sonaanga
Karthik: enna Priya poitaala?
Janaki: haaan, yen unaku theriatha avanga iruka mataanga nu?

Karthik: ila soleerpa naa maranthurupen. Seri naa poi friends ah hotel la irunthu mandapam kooptu vantharen, avangaluku vali theriathu..
He rushed to his car and raced to the airport. He mind buzzed with so many questions. Yen solaama poita? kovama? ethaachu pidiklaya? intha kalyanam pidiklaya?
He called her number and frantically searched for her in the departure terminal hoping to get a glimpse of her before she leaves. After a while she picked up:

Karthik: Hey Priya, enga iruke nee? departure counter la engayum kaanom nee?
Priya: sollu Karthik
Karthik: rombo dhooram poitiya? enga iruke nee?
Priya: Naa epovo poiten da, nee thedaathe, po Jaanu wait pantu irupa
 
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Yea avlodhan... Romba thookam vandhuchu, so thoongiten
Lol, start from scratch nu sonnen, athukunu avanga porandhathula irundhu poiteenga and it was nice but innum continuation irundhu irundha nalla irukum.

Indha thread February love stories idhula love eh illaiyae
 
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